Chapter 9: Page 19

posted 5th Nov 2019, 1:25 AM

Chapter 9: Page 19
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5th Nov 2019, 1:25 AM

zerothe3rd

Thanks to THOZMP for thinkin' up the 'comfort blanket' idea for Kyoni's gun. That was brilliant. Some people have comfort animals, others have guns.

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5th Nov 2019, 7:57 AM

Thozmp

Glad you liked it. Still funny.

Also like the whole "I don't trust you, but I trust the guy who brought me to you." thing. After all, she doesn't actually know Lin, but she does know Raph.

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6th Nov 2019, 7:54 PM

zerothe3rd

Oh it's hilarious!

Kyoni has grown not to trust people everyone she first meets. Considering how bad it turned out before I'd say she's learning! I like the way she said it as well. Very clear.

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7th Nov 2019, 8:39 AM

Thozmp

Strangely, I kind of hope that someone (Raph, maybe?) confirms that yes, Kyoni's comfort pistol is a thing, she didn't just make it up for Lin.

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5th Nov 2019, 7:26 PM

Delta-v

What did I tell you? Kyoni's innate charm is working on Xi already. :P

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6th Nov 2019, 7:51 PM

zerothe3rd

Ah yes, all charm, making Xi all angry!

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6th Nov 2019, 11:26 AM

Delta-v

Um, @ZEROTHE3RD: there seem to be some words missing from Xi's second speech bubble in panel one, and Lin's second speech bubble in panel 5. The statements don't quite scan....

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6th Nov 2019, 6:33 PM

zerothe3rd

She's referring to him giving his services to people who are wanted. She says it is dangerous and Lin says it is his choice who he helps. Lin is a pacifist but Xi... isn't so much. I was trying to hint that maybe a dangerous person tried to take advantage of the situation and Xi stopped it. Originally Xi mentioned his pacifism but I changed it. Maybe I shouldn't have changed it.

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6th Nov 2019, 8:57 PM

Delta-v

Xi's subtext was clear enough. The wording just threw me off for a bit. :)

As far as Lin's statement, is he asking her to tell him about herself, or the details of how she got hurt?

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12th Nov 2019, 2:19 AM

zerothe3rd

Lin's statement is a bit of mystery. Esp since I'm going to a different scene next page! Anyways he's asking about herself. He doesn't seem to care how injuries happen.

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