Chapter 8: Page 21

posted 11th Mar 2019, 11:07 PM

Chapter 8: Page 21
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11th Mar 2019, 11:07 PM

zerothe3rd

Her wrist hurts too much to grip things. It took a while to figure out a way to illustrate sharp pains; hopefully it works!

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12th Mar 2019, 12:41 PM

Thozmp

I do like the use of lightning for sharp pain. It certainly feels that way when it happens to you. Also, that shopkeeper is a joy, "Rarely come in, anymore." He obviously remembers the times when the gun fights happened in his store.

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17th Mar 2019, 11:59 PM

zerothe3rd

Haha yeah. I like how he has some insurance behind him in case they happen again.

I'm glad others agree with the lightning effect. Nerve pains always remind me of electricity feedbacks.

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12th Mar 2019, 7:28 PM

Delta-v

Unless Kyoni has some quick-regenerative abilities or serum, she's probably looking at several months of recuperation.

And I agree about the lightning. :)

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18th Mar 2019, 12:31 AM

zerothe3rd

She is looking at a long recovery time. Kyoni doesn't have any fast healing.

Glad the lightning worked out

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