Chapter 7: Page 36

posted 6th Aug 2018, 11:15 PM

Chapter 7: Page 36
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6th Aug 2018, 11:15 PM

zerothe3rd

So something that I'm not sure translated well. The creature was suppose to look inside the building, to see the status of the other bug, before fully piercing her forearm.

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7th Aug 2018, 5:37 AM

knyghtmarev3

Kyoni looks to be in pretty dire straits here. Yeah, the one panel was a bit confusing, but otherwise top notch as always

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7th Aug 2018, 5:46 PM

zerothe3rd

Thanks! A large problem is all the panels are too dark on some screens. On two of my screens they're visible but on my phone they're not. I think to make those panels readable I would need to add a panel after the first contact. Perhaps a reaction of kyoni AFTER the claw connects with the wristcom. then it might flow better.

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7th Aug 2018, 10:44 AM

Delta-v

Gaah! Her Wristcom! Now that bug's just being petty. ><

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7th Aug 2018, 5:43 PM

zerothe3rd

It's trying to make her suffer. D:

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7th Aug 2018, 2:38 PM

knyghtmarev3

One thing I'm slightly unclear on.... did the bug impale her torso, or is it just pinning her down? Little hard to tell

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7th Aug 2018, 5:39 PM

zerothe3rd

It's pinning her down. Though it is a lot of weight on what is a probably broken ribs.

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7th Aug 2018, 5:42 PM

Chippewa Ghost

FYI: that's not how you're supposed to turn off an Apple watch.

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7th Aug 2018, 5:47 PM

zerothe3rd

Damn it I've been doing it wrong for years.

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