Chapter 7: Page 17

posted 26th Mar 2018, 11:24 PM

Chapter 7: Page 17
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26th Mar 2018, 11:24 PM

zerothe3rd

Oh.

April 3 2018: Made a change shortly after posting it to this and the next page. There is now a bit of damage on the wall to show the damage and position.

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27th Mar 2018, 6:12 AM

Delta-v

Lilith ex machina?

I notice that Kyoni lost her freshly loaded pistol.

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27th Mar 2018, 5:57 PM

zerothe3rd

Do you mean the shotgun dropped? She still has a few weapons but she is in a real tight spot.

Maybe Lilith will jump in and help! Maybe.

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28th Mar 2018, 1:36 PM

mladshiy

Man I really love stuffs with speed lines like that. Very beautiful effects.
Now, the shotgun's barrel probably got bent after that block.

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30th Mar 2018, 7:22 PM

Delta-v

Are those speed lines on the bug's leg/appendage or are they spines? One of them seems to be sticking in her left hand.

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1st Apr 2018, 11:59 AM

zerothe3rd

This way of speedlines proved pretty nice looking before. I was tempted to do Kyoni with those lines but it didn't look right. That shotgun is pretty messed up now... Although I didn't draw it the Daleko, her rifle, received some damage as well.

They're speedlines, though the one near her hand does come to a really sharp looking point which does look like a spike/needle... hmm I should fix that.

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